How to get more Feedback! So you have posted a poem, song or short story and want some feedback but aren’t getting any comments. We have all be there and it can be frustrating, I …

This is great Bobby! The rhymes are IMO well done and flow well. I must ask though, is this based on a real event? Did Colleen invite you to her house for a New Years Eve Party? If so I bet she …

You have some good rhymes, a feeling tone that I can relate with in this poem. The "grittiness" of life, a certain edge, understanding the darkness. I like your poem, glad you're sharing these …

They Knew Gordon knew Annabelle lied; quick turn of head, slight tilt of chin, signs noted and deciphered, soon after their rapport inception Annabelle knew